My Orientation

LI: Write an orientation that hooks the reader in.

You will need to explain what happened before the car ended up in the water, who is involved, how they are thinking and feeling, where this happened. Your orientation needs to stop just as the car enters the water.

Today Mark wasn't in that much in a good mood and he was speeding over the limit of the driving speed. And he went closer and closer to the sea drove and drove east that was closer to the sea. The he made it to the Auckland wolf and he  just kept on driving didn't care about the people and the speed he was going in. But he doesn't know what's up a head and danger he can cause himself.